Final Task: Review
I had my mom and some friends review the final task sequence. One of the bigger complaints I got is that I should've introduced the problem of the missing necklace much earlier. They said a way I could've done this was by touching my neck or something and realizing it wasn't there. Or we could have introduced the stalker a lot earlier. For example, like hiding him in the background in those beginning scenes. They also said that I could've placed more emphasis on the title. They gave me the suggestion of zooming in on the title more, because it's not totally clear on which one is the title. Another critique is that there should be more focus on the empty made bed at the end so that you can tell that she got kidnapped. I also got told that color grading would make the film look more professional. Additionally, I got a lot of critiques on the font, and that the yellow is not fitting and the font.
Most of the compliments we got was on the masking of the text. For example, like in the beginning when the text appears behind the main character walking. They also complimented how I placed the fonts throughout the video. They said that they fit the scenes well with where I placed them. Everyone that I showed the video to also complimented the swing scene. They said that the movement of the camera really looked interesting. I also got compliments on how we made the stalker look scary in the background. One of my friends said that their favorite part was the chase scene. He said that the switching of the camera angles really created tension. He also said that it really helped make it more climatic.
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